寫作專項(xiàng)攻略四

1、書面表達(dá)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是把銜接與過渡作為重要標(biāo)準(zhǔn)來要求的。學(xué)生要學(xué)會(huì)恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠@些表示邏輯關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語，使文章前后連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、過渡自然。一、使用過渡性詞語1．表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過渡詞：besides，in addition，moreover，furthermore，what's more，what's worse，on the one hand...，on the other hand...等。[例]　我不喜歡那件衣

2、服，而且它太貴了。(1)I don't like the dress；besides，it's too expensive.(2)I don't like the dress；moreover，it's too expensive.,2．表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比的過渡詞：but，however，yet，instead，on the other hand，on the contrary，despite，in spi

3、te of，whereas，nevertheless等。[例]　他原以為自己理解了那道題，但是他錯(cuò)了。(1)He thought he understood the problem，but he was mistaken.(2)He thought he understood the problem，however，he was mistaken.3．表目的過渡詞：for this reason/purpose，so that

4、，in order to/that等。[例]　為了讓學(xué)生聽清，老師提高了聲音。(1)The teacher raised his voice so that students could hear him clearly.(2)In order to make himself heared clearly，the teacher raised his voice.,4．表示因果關(guān)系的過渡性詞語：because，as，since，

5、for，thanks to，thus，therefore，as a result of，one reason is that...，another reason is that ...等。[例]　由于天在下雨，你最好乘出租車。(1)As it's raining，you'd better take a taxi.(2)It's raining so you'd better take a taxi.

6、5．表示列舉事實(shí)的過渡性詞語：for example/instance，such as，take...for example，that is to say，as follows，in other words等。[例]　許多偉人從貧困中崛起，例如林肯和愛迪生。(1)Many great men have risen from poverty—Lincoln and Edison，for example.(2)Many great

7、 men have risen from poverty，for example，Lincoln and Edison.,6．表特定的順序關(guān)系的過渡詞：first，firstly，second，secondly，third，thirdly，above all，first of all，then，next，finally，in the end，at last，eventually等。[例]　努力學(xué)習(xí)，最終你會(huì)成功的。(1)Work

8、hard，and you will succeed in the end.(2)Work hard，and you will succeed in time.7．表示并列的過渡性詞語：and，or，also，too，as well as，neither...nor...，not only...but also...，either...or...，not...but...等。[例]　他不但給我建議，還給我錢。(1)He gave

9、 me money as well as advice.(2)He gave me not only advice but also money.,8．表示條件的過渡性詞語：if，unless，as/so long as，on condition that等。[例]　只要有生命，就有希望。(1)As long as there is life，there is hope.(2)Where there is life，there

10、 is hope.9．表示讓步關(guān)系的過渡性詞語：as，though，even if/though，who(what，when，where)ever/no matter who(what，when，where)等。[例]　不管誰違法都要受到懲罰。(1)No matter who breaks the law，he will be punished.(2)Whoever breaks the law will be punishe

11、d.,10．表總結(jié)的過渡詞：in a word，in general，in short，to sum up，finally，in conclusion，in summary，generally speaking，all in all等。[例]　一般而言，語言是用來交際的。(1)In general，language is for communication.(2)Generally speaking，language is fo

12、r communication.,二、使用過渡性句子段與段之間除了借助于一些篇章層次上的連接性詞語，如however，on the other hand，on the contrary，similarly，therefore，in conclusion，in short等，還經(jīng)常需要使用一些表示過渡的句子來確保其連貫性。常見的過渡性句子類型有：1．設(shè)問引出下文為了引出下文所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，作者有時(shí)采用設(shè)問的方式引出下文。,2．總體陳

13、述不同觀點(diǎn)有時(shí)作者在前一個(gè)段落列舉各種現(xiàn)象或者引出某個(gè)要供大家討論的話題之后，接下來就要從整體上論述人們對(duì)此持有的不同看法，然后再具體論述各種觀點(diǎn)，如Different people have different opinions towards it.等。3．舉實(shí)例佐證有時(shí)為了增強(qiáng)某個(gè)觀點(diǎn)或者現(xiàn)象的說服力，我們可以使用實(shí)例加以佐證?？梢允褂谩皌ake...for example”來引出下文。,Ⅰ.根據(jù)句意，用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接性詞語填空

14、1．Jane was dressed in blue Mary was dressed in red.2．She will be late， ，she is caught in a traffic jam.3．He took the first bus. ，he got on time.4．

15、 the cat the dog has been fed，because the hostess is ill.5．They can go they promise to be back before 11 o'clock.Ⅱ.根據(jù)漢語提示完成句子1．英語是一門有用的語言。一方面，它是聯(lián)合國官方語言；另一方面，它在商業(yè)，科學(xué)及技術(shù)領(lǐng)域廣泛使

16、用。English is a useful language. ，it is an official language in the UN. ，it is widely used in business，science and technology.,while,what's worse,As a result,Neither,nor,as

17、 long as/so long as,For one thing,For another(thing),2．一般而言，為了保持身體健康，我們應(yīng)該飲食多樣化，除主食外，通常還包括適量的魚、肉、蔬菜和水果。 ，to keep fit，we should have various healthy diets，which include proper amounts of f

18、ish，meat，vegetables，fruit main food.3．首先，我需要你的姓名和住址。其次，你生日在什么時(shí)候？ ，I need your name and address. ，when's your birthday

19、?4．一方面60%的學(xué)生反對(duì)公園收門票，另一方面，40%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為應(yīng)該收門票。 ,60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees； ,40% think that fees should be charged.,Generally speaking,as

20、 well as/besides/in addition to,,To begin with,Then,On the one hand,on the other hand,5．然而，在城市生活的費(fèi)用通常是很高的。你必須找到一份報(bào)酬豐厚的工作。否則，你將負(fù)擔(dān)不起你所需要的東西。 ，living in the city is often very expensive.You must find a well&

21、#173;paid job， ，you will not afford the things you need.Ⅲ.閱讀下列短文，選擇適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞或短語填空，并根據(jù)行文補(bǔ)上第三段首句As a new way of shopping，online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life.,However,otherw

22、ise,，online shopping has many advantages.First，online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.Instead of searching a crowded store，we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like.

23、 ，it is much faster for us to do shopping.We don't have to spend a lot of time going to shops.Third，we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time.

24、 The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. ，we can be cheated easily. ，we cannot see the things in detai

25、l. ， the disadvantages of online shopping，I think it is an advanced way to do shopping.So we should develop it.,On(the)one hand,Second,On the other hand，online shopping is not so perfect./O