2019屆高考總復(fù)習(xí)限時(shí)規(guī)范訓(xùn)練（人教新課標(biāo)） 第三部分 寫作技能步步高 要訣4 4 滿分作文登場

1、第1頁（共2頁）第三部分第三部分要訣四要訣四(2014湖北)請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Smallthingsmakeabigdifference.Thesmallthingswedocanmakeusaresponsiblememberofthesociety.注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題；②除詩歌外，文體不限；③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，如引用提示語則不計(jì)入總詞

2、數(shù)?？紙鲎魑腇romathingsomedaysagoIknewthatitisnttoohardtobecomearesponsiblememberofthesociety.Icanstillremember①aincidentwhichhappenedonarainySundayafternoon.Iwasonmywaytothebookstewas②waitingthegreenlightatacrossingwhenagirlo

3、fabouttenwasknockeddownbyapassingcar(1)itdroveoffquickly.Amanimmediatelyrushedtothegirltogiveherfirstaid.Ialsojoinedinwithouthesitation.③ComparingwiththeescapeddriverIamproudofwhatIdid.AsamemberofthesocietyIrealizethat(2

4、)responsibilityplaysaveryimptantroleincreatingabettersociety.1錯(cuò)誤聚焦：(1)incident的首字母發(fā)元音音素，故應(yīng)將①a改為______。(2)wait是不及物動詞，故應(yīng)在②waiting后加介詞____________。(3)“與……相比”，屬習(xí)慣用法，故將③Comparing改為______________?！敬鸢浮?1)an(2)f(3)Compared2高分靚句：

5、(1)將畫線(1)改為非謂語動詞作狀語的形式：________________。(2)將畫線(2)改為強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語動詞形式：______________?！敬鸢浮?1)drivingoffquickly(2)responsibilitydoesplayaveryimptantroleincreatingabettersociety參考范文：DuringthelastsummervocationIexperiencedmanythingsbu

6、titwasonesmallthingthatwasthemostunfgettable.OnasunnySaturdayIwastakingabustovisitmyuncle.Somanypeoplewerethereonthebusthatsome第2頁（共2頁）personshadtostincludinganoldwoman.OnseeingthissceneIofferedmyseattoherwithouthesitati

7、onbecauseIthoughtrespectingtheoldhelpingothersisavirtueintraditionalChineseculture.WhenseeingthesmileonthewomansfaceIfeltveryproud.FromthissmallthingIcametounderstthatsmallthingsmakeadifferencetothewld.Onlywheneveryonepl

8、acesahighvalueonresponsibilityfthesocietycanwecreateabettersocietytolivein.(2015湖南長郡中學(xué)高三第六次月考)Sharewithotherssadnesswillbegreatlylessenedreducedwhilehappinesswillbedoubled.請根據(jù)以上的話寫一篇不少于120詞的英語短文，如引用提示語則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題；②

9、除詩歌外，文體不限；③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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11、____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion：Wearelivinginawld

12、inwhichsharingissoimptantthatwecanneveremphasizeitsimptancetoomuch.Bysharingwecanoftengreatlylessenoursadnessdoubleourhappiness.Whenitcomestothistopicmemiesfloodintomymind.TherewasatimewhenIwascaughtinthesadnessoffailing

13、animptantexammywldturnedgreyIlostinterestineverythinguntilmybestfriendcameuptocomftme.EncouragedmovedbyhiskindnessIsharedwithhimwhichrelievedmeoftroublessoon.LittlebylittleIregainedconfidence.Thefollowingmonthswitnessedm