高二英語(yǔ)作文專題訓(xùn)練

1、高二英語(yǔ)作文專題訓(xùn)練一、圖表類：（一）2010 年央視春晚的廣告收入創(chuàng)新高，但節(jié)目中的植入廣告引發(fā)了熱議。最近， 某網(wǎng)站舉行了一次題為“對(duì)今年春晚植入廣告的態(tài)度”的調(diào)查，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下餅圖 （pie chart）所示信息用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。注意： 1．對(duì)所給提示，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。 2．詞數(shù) 150 左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 3．植入廣告：product placement滿分文展示 1：

2、The 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.The opinions on this topic vary from person to person. On

3、e in four think there is so much of product placement that lots of people feel unsatisfied when they watch the programmes. And 10% of the people think product placement in the programmes greatly ruins the image of CCT

4、V, beause it will leave a bad impression on audience in and outside China. Besides, nearly one third of the people hold the opinion that it’s hard to relate the product placement to the programmes, making the audience

5、feel uncomfortable.However, there are 15% of the people who think it is helpful for the development of CCTV. And the rest think there is no need for us to be so strict with product placement. After all, it’s very natur

6、al.Personally, the product placement is really disgusting and CCTV should try to avoid it.本文總體結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰，作者通過(guò)整合拼圖，談?wù)搶?duì)待廣告的兩大觀點(diǎn)，最后陳 述自己的觀點(diǎn)，除此之外，作者在選詞造句上也下了一番工夫。在開頭，中間以及最 后的結(jié)尾處，優(yōu)美、地道的句式層出不窮，一些高級(jí)詞匯相互響應(yīng)，熠熠生輝，值得其 他學(xué)生借鑒。滿分文展示 2：Th

7、e 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.Dear Editor,I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we

8、’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.A small part of the students approve of it for the reason that on one hand, this punishment can decrease the amount of th

9、e traffic accidents. On the other hand, it can improve the safety of passengers and drivers. Besides, avoiding riding in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only responsible for us, but also for the driver and pede

10、strians.However, the majority of the students are strongly against this punishment in that they think it hard for passengers to judge whether the driver has drunk or not. What’s more, even the passengers know the drive

11、r has drunk, if the driver doesn’t accept their advice, it’s unfair to punish the passengers.Personally, I think people who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished because the public’s safety is the

12、 most important.作者分三個(gè)段落來(lái)完成此篇書面表達(dá)，先說(shuō)明少數(shù)人贊成的觀點(diǎn)，接著說(shuō)明多數(shù) 人反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)，最后給出作者自己的觀點(diǎn)，并說(shuō)明理由。結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)全面，作者觀 點(diǎn)鮮明，理由具有說(shuō)服力。文章中作者使用了大量的高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)，為文章增 添了色彩。on one hand, on the other hand, besides, however, what’s more, personally 等 過(guò)渡詞增強(qiáng)了文章的流

13、暢性。滿分文展示 2：I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.The minority of the students who are for the idea think that it

14、can reduce traffic accidents and promote the safety of traffic. They also think avoiding taking a car driven by a drunken driver is an activity responsible for passengers and the driver and other people on the road as

15、 well.On the contrary, the majority of the students are opposed to it. The first reason they give lies in that passengers have difficulty finding whether a driver is drunken. Apart from that, even if passengers know th

16、at the driver is drunken, it is unfair to punish them when the driver doesn’t take their suggestion seriously.In my view, it’s traffic security that greatly matters and we should punish those drunken drivers rather tha

17、n the passengers.該文的最大亮點(diǎn)是多處使用的復(fù)雜句式，體現(xiàn)作者嫻熟的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)技巧。Be opposed to, take…seriously 等高級(jí)短語(yǔ)的使用亦為文章增添了色彩。過(guò)渡詞 on the contrary, apart from, even if, in view, and 等使用較為考究。綜合全文的這些特點(diǎn)，該理 應(yīng)為一篇優(yōu)秀作文。標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文：Dear Editor, I’m writing to tel

18、l you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.The minority of the students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps reduce tra