中考作文 指導(dǎo)

1、How can we write a good composition(作文)?,第一步：都要認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作體裁、要求和提示要點(diǎn),具體做法：用筆勾畫,2008春節(jié)前，在我國的部分地區(qū)出現(xiàn)了百年罕見的特大暴風(fēng)雪，給人民帶來了重大損失，造成若干人傷亡，很多人深受失去家園之苦。獲悉這一消息后，人們紛紛伸出了援助之手，你們班級也不甘落后。請以班委會的名義根據(jù)提示寫一封100詞左右的英文倡議書。要求語義連貫，中心突出，詳略得當(dāng)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(

2、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)),提示： 1、暴風(fēng)雪造成的重大損失； 2、大家紛紛獻(xiàn)出愛心； 3、作為學(xué)生我們應(yīng)該做些什么？,第二步：列出寫作提綱（Outline）。,具體做法：根據(jù)段落整理寫作要點(diǎn),不要遺漏要點(diǎn)！,Write an Outline,可以用英文或中文,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,寫作前：,確定人稱、時(shí)態(tài),寫作后：,檢查,詞數(shù)足夠、要點(diǎn)完整，沒

3、有語法錯誤,Dear classmates, A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival. It brought us lots of trouble. Thousands of people were trapped in the stations, in the airports and on

4、the highways. In such a heavy snowstorm, a lot of people suffered from the loss of their homes. What was worse, many people were hurt , even lost their lives. After the news was reported, people all over the country show

5、ed their great love in different ways. Some gave food, clothes, drinking water, medicine and everything necessary, and some even gave money to them. As students, of course we should try our best to help those people in t

6、rouble. So offer your only pocket money, let’s help to fill the world with love. class committee,Dear classmates, A sudden snowstorm attacked

7、 some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festival. It brought lots of trouble to the people. Some people lost their lives.People all over the country donated food, drinking water, colthes to them. As we students

8、 , what should we do? We should donate our pocket money to them. We can also send them our old books.,扣分原因一詞數(shù)不夠！每少5詞，扣1分，約少40詞，只得12分。,,Dear classmates, A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before

9、 the 2008 Spring Festival. It was the most serious snowstorm during the centry. It brought people lots of trouble. Many people were hurt. Some people even lost their lives. A lot of people suffered from the loss of their

10、 homes. After the news was reported, we are all sorry for them. We should try our best to help them out of trouble! We should save our pocket money to donate it to them. We can also send the books and clothes that we nee

11、dn’t use to them. Let the world be full of love!,扣分原因二遺漏要點(diǎn)！少一要點(diǎn)，約扣5分，只得15分。,加入獻(xiàn)愛心,,,時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、結(jié)構(gòu)、短語搭配為大錯，1處1分。拼寫、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號為小錯，3處1分。,,,,,,,,A sudden snowstorm attacked some parts of our country before the 2008 Spring Festiv

12、al. it coursed us many problems. Many people hurt. Some even lost their life. They suffered from the lost of their homes. After hear this, people all over the country give food, drinking water, medicine and everything ne

13、cessary to them, some even donated money for them. As we students, what should we do? We are have pocket money， We can donate it to them. We can also give the books or clothes that are useless to them. Let’s take action

14、actively!,,,,It,caused,were hurt,lives,loss of,hearing,gave,to,have,useful,,.,只得13分,另外作文中書寫不規(guī)范，卷面不整潔也是要失分的（中考中有1—2分的卷面整潔分，這兩分不能丟！）。,解決方法：平時(shí)認(rèn)真規(guī)范書寫，少用或不用膠帶或修正液，盡量減少涂改。,寫作：第一步就是要認(rèn)真審題，明確寫作體裁、要求和提示要點(diǎn)第二步就是要列出寫作提綱，根據(jù)段落整理寫作要點(diǎn)。

15、,寫作前：,確定人稱、時(shí)態(tài),寫作后：,檢查,提示：1、描述你認(rèn)為最有意義的上月北京之行。2、談?wù)劚本┙裎糁取?、第29屆奧運(yùn)會將于2008年在北京舉行。北京是一個(gè)美麗的現(xiàn)代化城市。目前好多體育場館(gymnasium)正在新建。很多人在忙著學(xué)英語。中國有志把它辦成一屆“綠色奧運(yùn)，人文奧運(yùn)，科技奧運(yùn)”。參考詞匯：“Green, Humanity and science”（綠色，奧運(yùn)，科技奧運(yùn)）全國人民都很高興。4、中國是一個(gè)具有

16、悠久歷史的國家，而且正在變得越來越強(qiáng)大。,Example 1根據(jù)提示完成下面你（Li Ming）給Jim一封100詞左右的信。建議他有空一定去看看。,Write an Outline.,,conclusion,,,北京之行（自擬）今昔之比（自擬）奧運(yùn)會（看要求）悠久歷史（看要 求）,,一般過去時(shí),,現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),,一般將來時(shí)現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),I hope you will come to Beijing soon.,Let’s

17、 practice!,Example 2近來，國家啟動了“陽光體育工程”，旨在提高青少年身體素質(zhì)。你校為響應(yīng)號召，開展了一系列體育活動，請根據(jù)圖表提供的信息和漢語提示，寫一篇不少于100個(gè)詞的短文。內(nèi)容必須包括提示中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：1、學(xué)校開展了哪些體育活動？最受歡迎的是什么？（見圖）2、簡述你參加的一次體育活動，如一場體育比賽，一次體育鍛煉的經(jīng)歷、一堂體育課……3、體育活動對你學(xué)習(xí)、生活……,Let’s enjoy our o