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1、孫遠(yuǎn)孫遠(yuǎn)GMAT作文作文講義講義課程：程：GMAT考試輔導(dǎo)作文考試輔導(dǎo)作文主講教師：孫遠(yuǎn)主講教師：孫遠(yuǎn)總課時(shí)：總課時(shí)：7.00課程簡介：課程簡介：大家好，歡迎您選擇了我的大家好，歡迎您選擇了我的GMAT作文課。您已經(jīng)做作文課。您已經(jīng)做出了正確的選擇。出了正確的選擇。GMAT考兩篇文章：考兩篇文章：AnalysisofArgument（邏（邏輯問題分析）和輯問題分析）和AnalysisofIssue（是非問題分析）（是非問題分析）。GMA

2、T作文作文話題涉及面很廣，其中包括大量的商業(yè)類話題。從內(nèi)容、論證、結(jié)話題涉及面很廣，其中包括大量的商業(yè)類話題。從內(nèi)容、論證、結(jié)構(gòu)到語言，構(gòu)到語言，GMAT作文對考生都提出了很高的要求。但是，我相信作文對考生都提出了很高的要求。但是，我相信經(jīng)過我們共同的努力，你一定能如愿奪得高分。經(jīng)過我們共同的努力，你一定能如愿奪得高分。一、考試指南一、考試指南GMAT作文考兩篇作文，一篇是一個(gè)是非問題分析（AnalysisofanIssue）另一篇作文

3、是一個(gè)邏輯問題分析（AnalysisofanArgument）。兩篇作文各考30分鐘，加起來共一個(gè)小時(shí)。簡單地說，第一篇作文是立論，第二篇作文是駁論。1.邏輯問題分析例文ThefollowingappearedinamemumfromtheDirectofHumanResourcestotheexecutiveofficersofCompanyX.“Lastyearwesurveyedouremployeesonimprovements

4、neededatCompanyXbyhavingthemrankinderofimptancetheissuespresentedinalistofpossibleimprovements.Improvedcommunicationsbetweenemployeesmanagementwasconsistentlyrankedastheissueofhighestimptancebytheemployeeswhorespondedtot

5、hesurvey.Asyouknowwehavesinceinstitutedregularcommunicationssessionsconductedbyhighlevelmanagementwhichtheemployeescanattendonavoluntarybasis.TherefeitislikelythatmostemployeesatCompanyXnowfeelthattheimprovementmostneede

6、datthecompanyhasbeenmade.”Discusshowwellreasonedyoufindthisargument.Inyourdiscussionbesuretoanalyzethelineofreasoningtheuseofevidenceintheargument.Fexampleyoumayneedtoconsiderwhatquestionableassumptionsunderliethethinkin

7、gwhatalternativeexplanationsCaseStudy1：Thefollowingappearedaspartofanarticleinadailynewspaper.“Thecomputerizedonboardwarningsystemthatwillbeinstalledincommercialairlinerswillvirtuallysolvetheproblemofairplanecollisions.O

8、neplane’swarningsystemcanreceivesignalsfromanother’stransponderaradiosetthatsignalsaplane’scourseindertodeterminethelikelihoodofacollisionrecommendevasiveaction.”Discusshowwellreasonedyoufindthisargument.Inyourdiscussion

9、besuretoanalyzethelineofreasoningtheuseofevidenceintheargument.Fexampleyoumayneedtoconsiderwhatquestionableassumptionsunderliethethinkingwhatalternativeexplanationscounterexamplesmightweakentheconclusion.Youcanalsodiscus

10、swhatstofevidencewouldstrengthenrefutetheargumentwhatchangesintheargumentwouldmakeitmelogicallysoundwhatifanythingwouldhelpyoubetterevaluateitsconclusion.2分作文:Thisargumenthasnoinfmationaboutaircollisions.Ithinkmostcasesh

11、appenisnewairptsbecausetheairtrafficisheavy.Inthiscasesoundairptcontrolcouldsolvetheproblem.Ithinkthisargumentislogicallyreasonable.Itsassumptionisthatplanecollisionsarecausedbyplanesthatdon’tknoweachotherspositions.Sopi

12、lotscandonothingiftheyknoweachother’spositionthroughthesystemitwillsolvetheproblem.Ifitcanprovideevidencetheproblemislackofknowledgeofeachother’spositionsitwillbemesoundpersuasive.Meinfmationaboutaircollisionsishelpful(t

13、hereasonfaircollisions)第一課時(shí)完4分作文Theargumentisnotlogicallyconvincing.Itdoesnotstatewhetherallplanescanreceivesignalsfromeachother.Itdoesnotstatewhetherplanesconstantlyreceivesignals.Iftheyonlyreceivesignalsonceeverycertai

14、ntimeintervalcollisionswillnotdefinitelybeprevented.Furtheriftheyreceiveasignalrightbefetheyareabouttocrashtheycannotavoideachother.Themainflawintheargumentisthatitassumesthatthetwoplanesuponreceivingeachother’ssignalswi

15、llknowwhichevasiveactiontotake.Fexamplethetwoplanescouldbegoingtowardseachotherthenreceivethesignals.Ifoneturnsatanangletothelefttheotherturnsatanangletotherightthetwoplaneswillstillcrash.Eveniftheyreceiveanupdatedsignal

16、theywillnothavetimetoavoideachother.Thefollowingargumentwouldbemesoundpersuasive.Thenewwarningsystemwillsolvetheproblemofairplanecollisions.Eachplanewillreceiveconstantcontinualsignalsfromeachother.Ifthetwoplanesareheade

17、dinadirectionwheretheywillcrashthesystemwillcodinatethesignalstelloneplanetogoonewaytheotherplanetogoanotherway.Thenewsystemwillensurethatthetwoplaneswillturnindifferentdirectionssotheydon’tcrashbytryingtopreventtheigina

18、lcrash.Inadditiontheplaneswillbeabletoseethemselvestheotheronacomputerscreentoaidintheevasiveaction.6分作文：Theargumentthatthiswarningsystemwillvirtuallysolvetheproblemofairplanecollisionsomitssomeimptantconcernsthatbeaddre