2017英語專四作文講評及寫作指導(dǎo)

1、TEM4新題型寫作新題型寫作題型變化：題型變化：Previously：陳述觀點：陳述觀點——論證觀點論證觀點——得出結(jié)論得出結(jié)論Now：概括材料：概括材料——提出觀點并論證觀點提出觀點并論證觀點——得出結(jié)論（重申觀點得出結(jié)論（重申觀點或提出建議）或提出建議）材料作文材料作文Tactics：1.仔細審題，分析材料（仔細審題，分析材料（23mins）2.列出提綱，確定布局（列出提綱，確定布局（34mins）Para.1.引出話題，概括材料（

2、引出話題，概括材料（summarize，paraphrase）Para.2.提出自身觀點，列出理由論證提出自身觀點，列出理由論證Para.3.重申觀點或提出建議重申觀點或提出建議3.正式寫作（正式寫作（3035mins）4.檢查并優(yōu)化（檢查并優(yōu)化（23mins）評分標準評分標準如何總結(jié)材料如何總結(jié)材料第一段：第一段：Describethephenomenonintroducethediscussedtopicopinionsfrombo

3、thsidessummarizeparaphrasethetopicsentencesintheexcerpt.參考范文WithIntelligentMachinestoDotheThinkingWillOurBrainsGetLazy范文：范文：Inmyopinionartificialintelligencewillenableourbrainstogetmecreative.Admittedlyalotofwkhasbeendon

4、ebyintelligentmachines.Itseemsthatthefunctionofpeoplehasbeenweakenedpeople‘sbrainshavebeenreplaced.Asamatteroffactthankstointelligentmachinespeoplecanexptheircreativeenergyaddnewvarieties.Simplyspeakingwhenpeoplearefreef

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7、nclusion…Basedontheaboveexhaustiveelabationit’squitenaturaltocometotheconclusionthat…范文：范文：Althoughartificialintelligenceistheexhibitionofpeople’shighdegreeofcreativepoweritshouldbenotedthatitislikeadoubleedgedswd.Thesen