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1、模板一模板一引語(yǔ)評(píng)論作文（2011年12月新題型）第一段：引語(yǔ)引用第一段：引語(yǔ)引用簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)論簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)論（文章的第1、2句；引用題目中給予的原話，并對(duì)這句話的表層意思進(jìn)行評(píng)論）文章第一句話：1）第一句的第一種寫(xiě)法：直接引用某位名人曾經(jīng)說(shuō)過(guò)的話“.“sb.oncesaid.“GivemesixhourstochopdownatreeIwillspendthefirstfoursharpeningtheaxe.“AbrahamLincolnonc

2、esaid.[201112月CET6]2）第一句的第二種寫(xiě)法：直接引用某句平常人說(shuō)的話“.“Youmusthaveheardthesewdshundredsoftimesfromsb.…“QuittingsmokingistheeasiestthinginthewldI’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youmusthaveheardthesewdshundredsoftimesprobablyfromyourfath

3、erfriendsevenyourself.[201112月CET4]文章第二句話：對(duì)引語(yǔ)的表面含義進(jìn)行評(píng)論(用自己的語(yǔ)言，解釋和補(bǔ)充題目的引語(yǔ))自由發(fā)揮，見(jiàn)真功夫Althoughfourhourseemstobequitealongtimeitcanhelppeoplechopdownthetreemesmoothlylesslabiousintheresttwohours.[201112月CET6]Quittingsmokingis

4、soeasyaslongaskeepawayfromcigarettes.Howevermanypeoplecanhardlyresistthetemptationofsmokingthengiveuptheirattempttoquitsmoking.Itisobviousthatwithoutstrongwilldeterminationnoonecanquitsmokingwithease.[201112月CET4]第二段：意義闡

5、述段第二段：意義闡述段（文章的第3456四句話，都寫(xiě)在第二段；這是字?jǐn)?shù)最多，內(nèi)容最豐滿的一段，稱為“豬肚”）文章第三句話：（點(diǎn)明引語(yǔ)的深層含義，從表面到深入，從局限到擴(kuò)展提煉出引語(yǔ)包含的中心詞、主題詞A）ThesayingsentenceaimsatinfmingusofthesignificanceofAinourpursuitofsuccess.Thesayingaimsatinfmingusofthesignificanceofa

6、dequatepreparationinourpursuitofsuccess.[201112月CET6]Thesentenceaimsatinfmingusofthesignificanceofastrongwillinourpursuitofsuccess.[201112月CET4]文章第四句話：(上句提出了引語(yǔ)的深層含義，那么從第四句開(kāi)始就要說(shuō)明這個(gè)事物的重要Thereisnodenyingthatwecan’temphasize

7、theimptanceofsth.toomuch.~fullpreparation.[201112月CET6]~astrongwill.[201112月CET4]文章第五句話：(論述這個(gè)事物的重要。建議用“短句長(zhǎng)句”（或者“主題句”擴(kuò)展句）的方式展開(kāi)！)Sth.canhelppeopledo…Fullpreparationcanhelppeoplereducetheriskoffailureaswecanadoptcounterplan

8、s(預(yù)備方案)whensomethingunexpectedoccurs.[201112月CET6]Astrongwillcanhelppeopleachievetheirgoalsmesmoothlyasitcaninspire3拓展句：Ifeveryoneinagroupcancooperatewitheachotherplaytheirownstrengththoseseeminglyunachievabletasksfonesi

9、nglepersoncanbesuccessfullyaccomplishedperfectlydonethroughcombinedeffts.舉例：Afterthefinancialcrisissweptthewholewldin2008howcouldthewldeconomyrecoveratsuchahighspeedwithoutcooperationamongcountriesallaroundthewldHow:Wesh

10、ouldAlwaysbearinmindthatinsuchacompetitivewldoftodayNoindividualsganizationscanachievesuccesswithoutcooperation.Henceweneedtofosterasenseofcooperationbyattendingvariousgroupactivities.“Comingtogetherisabeginning.Keepingt

11、ogetherisaprogress.Wkingtogetherisasuccess.”HenryFdoncesaid.2.堅(jiān)持和毅力的重要性堅(jiān)持和毅力的重要性Significance：主題句：Persistencecanhelpuscarveoutawaytosuccess.拓展句：Althoughthewaytosuccessisbumpy(崎嶇的)fullofinevitablesetbacksitispersistencetha

12、tleadustothedestinationweareeagertoreach.舉例：HowcouldThomasEdison，oneofthegreatestinventsthroughoutthehistyofmankindwhoexperiencednumerousunsuccessfulattemptsinventthefirstelectriclampwithoutpersistenceHow:Weshouldalwaysb

13、earinmindthatpersistenceplaysanindispensableroleinourpursuitofsuccess.Whencomingacrosssetbackshardshipsweneedtogritourteethsticktothefaiththatourefftspersistencewillberewarding.“Greatwksareperfmednotbystrengthbutbypersev

14、erance.”SamuelJohnsononcesaid.3.樂(lè)觀和悲觀心態(tài)樂(lè)觀和悲觀心態(tài)(人生哲理人生哲理)Significance:主題句Optimismcanhelppeopleachievetheirobjectivesmesmoothly.拓展句Asitcaninspirepeopletoapproachchallengesovercomedifficultieswithconfidencecourage.舉例：Howcou

15、ldBeethoven，agreatGermanmusiccomposerwhobecamedeafathisfties，composesomanyenduring(經(jīng)久不衰的)symphonies(wks)winrespectaffectionfromthewholewldwithoutoptimismHow:Weshouldalwaysbearinmindthatoptimismwillexertafarreachinginflue

16、nceonourlife.Hence，whatwemustdoistocultivateanoptimisticmindsettryourutmosttoinfluencethosewhoarepessimistic.“Anoptimistseestheroseapessimistthethn.”Aphilosopheroncesaid.4.謙虛的好處謙虛的好處Significance:主題句Modestycaninspirepeopl