高中英語(yǔ)作文--建議信

1、建議信建議信(1)闡釋原因；提出建議類闡釋原因；提出建議類請(qǐng)你代表你班同學(xué)給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，反映一下你校食堂的幾點(diǎn)問題，以引起學(xué)校重視，并針對(duì)問題提出兩條合理建議。問題包括：1.菜價(jià)昂貴，菜市單一；2.排隊(duì)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，浪費(fèi)午休時(shí)間；3.味道不佳，浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:食堂canteenDearPrincipalRecentlymanystude

2、ntsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggest

3、ions.Thankyou!YoursLiHua作文范文：作文范文：DearPrincipalRecentlymanystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernist

4、hatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhilesomestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawfulwhichleadstoalotofwaste.AsfarasI’mconcernedmeasuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecantee

5、n.Firstofallit’ssuggestedthatthepricesbemereasonablethechoicesofdishesbemevarious.Inadditionit’sbettertoopenmeservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!需注意的詞匯、表達(dá)：需注意的詞匯、表達(dá)：1.delici

6、ouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.可口的)cook(n.廚師)cooker(n.炊具)price價(jià)格2.lowerbringdowntheprice降低價(jià)格3.atalowerreasonableprice以較低的價(jià)格4.varietiesofdishes種類多樣的菜品5.Fonething…….Fanother……6.makesb(not)dosth7.waitstinlineinaqueuefalongt

7、ime8.Thekindsoffoodarefew.表達(dá)食堂出現(xiàn)的問題：表達(dá)食堂出現(xiàn)的問題：9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffdthem.10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefromwhichisfarfromsatisfacty.whichcan’tsatisfyourneeds.11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostinlinewhi

8、chdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttastegood.nice.Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’tgood.13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftwasted14.It’sawasteoftimetostinlinefalongtime.15.Thefood

9、inthecanteentastessobadwhichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.Inthelongrunit’sbadfourhealthstudy.17.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表達(dá)提出的建議：表達(dá)提出的建議：18.Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoa

10、goodsolutiontotheproblems.19.Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemekindsoffood.20.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.Soit’shightimefustotakemeasures21.TosolvetheproblemsIthinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure(形象)impr

11、ovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.22.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23.Thecanteenshouldopenmewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.24.AsfarasI’mconcernedthecanteenshoulda

12、ttachimptancetothequality.What’smedifferentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.25.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.建議模板：建議模板：Dear….I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingfmyadviceonhowto…….(引出話題引出話題).Herea

13、reafewsuggestions.Firstofallitisimptanttodosth.Thenitalsohelpstodosth.Besidesitshouldbeagoodideatodosth.建議句型積累：建議句型積累：需要注意積累的詞匯、短語(yǔ)、和句子：需要注意積累的詞匯、短語(yǔ)、和句子：主格主格賓格賓格形容性物主代詞形容性物主代詞名詞性物主代詞名詞性物主代詞反身代詞反身代詞Imemyminemyself第一人稱第一人稱w

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15、冷靜下來ataloss迷惑不解keepintouchwith保持聯(lián)系bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面對(duì)某人要求嚴(yán)格hearttoheart推心置腹的idea注意想法test測(cè)試text文本cheat欺騙wantsbtodosth想讓某人做某事1.Itwasbecauseshedidn’twanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighsces.2.Sheisn’tawarethat

16、thelieshavehurtbothyouherself.3.Beingateenagersheneedstobeencouraged.it’syouwhocandothis.4.Itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.5.Youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubefesolvingtheproblem.6.

17、Itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavi.7.Thereasonwhyshedidn’ttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn’twanttoletyoudown.8.Itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveafacetofacetalkwithhersothatshemightopenherhearttoyou.9.Toavoidtheliesyoush

18、ouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams10.Thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.11.Confrontedwith(面對(duì))theseproblemsyoushouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.12.AsfarasI’mconcernedit’sbett

19、ertocommunicatewithherinafriendlywaytoletherknowit’swrongtotelllies.13.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmeimptancetophysicalmentalhealth.Meoverit’sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.改錯(cuò)：改錯(cuò)：1.Therearesomeadvice.2.Don’tsad

20、.3.Youshouldgivehermeencourage.4.Shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexamyouwillpunishher.5.Ifshehasdifficultyinlearningyoushouldinspireshehelpsheout.6.Shedoesn’twantyouangry.7.Pleasenottobesowried.8.Oneofthereasonisthatsheis

21、n’tdaretotellyouthetruth.9.Becausesheafraidparents.10.Soshedon’twanttomentionit.11.Youshouldapologytoher.12.You’dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.13.You’dbetterbecareaboutherhealthstudy.14.I’mveryunderstyourconditio