托福官方作文185題庫范文

1、<p><b>　　目錄</b></p><p>　　TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 思路＋范文 完美重排版 …………………………3</p><p>　　本部分填補了目前網絡iBT 備考資料的空白。根據李笑來老師提供的作文思</p><p>　　路與《iBT 高分作文》原書范文重排。本部分對iBT 考試的獨立寫作部分與</p>

2、;<p>　　口語部分均具有重要的參考作用。</p><p>　　范文中加粗部分均依為原書所有。</p><p>　　附錄一 185 題庫按關鍵詞分類 …………………………………………184</p><p><b>　　照錄原書附錄</b></p><p>　　附錄二 李笑來作文筆記（獨立部分）………………

3、…………………185</p><p>　　根據本人新東方聽課詳盡筆記整理而成</p><p>　　附錄三 句法多樣性專題 ………………………………………………193</p><p>　　附錄四 例證表達法 ………………………………………………………199</p><p>　　時間匆忙，歡迎指出錯誤，將在后面的版本中修正。</p>

4、<p>　　感謝笑來老師給我們提供了如此之好的備考材料，一切版權歸笑來老師所有。</p><p>　　僅供廣大iBT 考生備考參考，建議購買原版以更好使用。</p><p>　　Lost Lawyer</p><p>　　2006 年11 月10 日</p><p>　　Page 2 of 201</p><p

5、>　　TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 思路＋范文 完美重排版</p><p>　　1. Why people attend college?</p><p>　　People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation,

6、 increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　說明人們選擇上大學的具體原因(一個

7、或者多個)：增加經驗、拓展知識、開闊視野</p><p>　　為了實現理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩來就是為中華之崛起而讀書)為了保證將來的就業(yè)機會 父母要求子女上大學 別人都上大學了，所以自己也選擇讀書 找不到工作</p><p>　　("無知"，總是一部分人做出某個選擇的理由。上大學如是[1]，去博物館如是[12]，從事危險運動亦如是[43]。

8、)</p><p>　　相關題目：[168]</p><p><b>　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work force. Most students w

9、ho have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market

10、. Before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be competitive for pre</p><p>　　any job with computer skills as a

11、prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, degree holders</p><p>　　are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.</p><p>　　Additionally,

12、employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example, many</p><p>　　companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract&

13、lt;/p><p>　　them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still place</p><p>　　Page 3 of 201</p><p>　　TOEFL.iBT 高分作文完美重排版Edite

14、d by Lost Lawyer</p><p>　　a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a well-known</p><p>　　university. Because of the extent to which a college d

15、egree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a</p><p>　　given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher</p><p>　　sala

16、ries than applicants who lack college diplomas.</p><p>　　Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a</p><p>　　clear path towa

17、rds professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a job</p><p>　　in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The sam

18、e major could also</p><p>　　be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be unavailable without</p><p>　　taking the first step of an undergraduate de

19、gree in biology.</p><p>　　2. Are parents the best teachers? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.<

20、/p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　因觀點絕對而不能同意。</p><p>　　不是所有的父母都是好老師</p><p>　　最好的老師不僅僅是父母</p><p>　　有些父母盡管善良，但對教育孩子一無所知</p><p>　　z有些父母不配做孩子

21、的老師，對孩子有不良影響</p><p><b>　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most concerned about the developmen

22、t of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the best teachers. </p><p>　　First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less

23、have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously c

24、opy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. All too often we</p><p>　　Moreover, some

25、parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of teaching their children almost every su

26、bject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. T

27、herefore, to be a professional in a certain f</p><p>　　Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts of children education are virtually beyond teachers' reac

28、hes. It is parents that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us that parents' love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Albeit Einstein's mother and that of Forest Gump are both good ex

29、amples. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of those children whose paren</p><p>　　In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that pa

30、rents are the best teachers.</p><p>　　3. Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?</p><p>　　Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live

31、? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　總體上，“食物變得越來越容易準備”是一種進步[37]，所以自然會帶來improvement。使人們的生活方式發(fā)</p><p>　　生了一些變化：

32、 好的：</p><p>　　節(jié)省時間，越來越方便，一定程度上把婦女從繁雜的家務中解放了出來</p><p><b>　　也有不好的變化：</b></p><p>　　準備食物是一種重

33、要的家庭活動，可是食物變得容易準備一定程度上使家人在一起的時間減少</p><p>　　了，比如“速凍餃子”[quick-frozen dumpling]</p><p>　　快餐業(yè)的高速發(fā)展的一個直接結果是，人們普遍變胖了，尤其是孩子</p><p><b>　　相關題目：[13]</b></p><p><b&

34、gt;　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　People today can prepare their meal much easier than has ever been before. To prepare a single dinner,provident housewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they had to

35、buy home dirty vegetables which had to wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth. Each and every step of preparation was a time-consuming task. But now, things are entirely different. Supermarkets provide vegetab

36、les and meat clean and neat, some of them even have relevant ingredients and need only a few minutes t</p><p>　　opportunity it is.</p><p>　　4. Which is more important, book knowledge or experien

37、ce?</p><p>　　It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast</p><p>　　knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.

38、In your opinion, which source is</p><p>　　more important? Why?</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　注意一定要先進行比較</p><p><b>　　從書本中獲取的知識</b></p><

39、;p><b>　　優(yōu)點：</b></p><p><b>　　題材、范圍更多</b></p><p><b>　　有更多的深度</b></p><p><b>　　更加的系統</b></p><p><b>　　缺點：</b>&

40、lt;/p><p><b>　　有時過于教條</b></p><p><b>　　也不見得完全準確</b></p><p><b>　　從經驗中獲取的知識</b></p><p><b>　　優(yōu)點：</b></p><p><b&

41、gt;　　獲取直接、簡單明了</b></p><p><b>　　更加地實用</b></p><p>　　有些知識無法從書本中獲得</p><p><b>　　缺點：</b></p><p>　　不系統，很大的隨意性</p><p><b>　　很容易產

42、生片面理解</b></p><p>　　不一定要說A比B更重要，或者B比A更重要。也可以選擇在不同的情況下，有不同的比較。學習抽象</p><p>　　的知識，書本是最好的來源。學習游泳，這只能靠經驗。另外，大多數的知識要書本經驗相結合才可</p><p><b>　　以。</b></p><p>　　相關題

43、目：[116]</p><p>　　有些科目或者知識適合通過實踐學習，比如，語言，體育</p><p>　　有些科目或者知識適合通過閱讀學習，比如，物理、化學、歷史、地理</p><p>　　有些科目或者知識適合通過與別人交流來學習，比如銷售技巧；管理技巧</p><p>　　所以不能一概而論(treat different things/p

44、roblems/matters] as the same)，要看學什么，以及學習的階段。</p><p><b>　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　In general, knowledge gained from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. We now live in

45、a world that typophile is no longer exorbitant, and that printed matters are readily available. In libraries, we can learn nearly everything only if we have already acquired basic reading skills, philosophy, history, lit

46、erature, physics, mathematics, chemicals, biology, geography, anthropology, and the list will go on. Unlike the experience of an individual that is limited by the range of t</p><p>　　5. The advantages and di

47、sadvantages of a new factory near your community</p><p>　　A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the</p><p>　　advantages and disadvantages o

48、f this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the</p><p>　　factory? Explain your position.</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　先討論“假設工廠真的落成了，而帶來的好處和壞處”，而后發(fā)表

49、看法。</p><p><b>　　好處：</b></p><p>　　直接增加了就業(yè)機會(到工廠去上班)；間接增加了就業(yè)機會(會有很多服務業(yè)，比如飯店、商店、</p><p><b>　　超市等等跟著開業(yè))</b></p><p>　　如果工廠規(guī)模足夠大，物流規(guī)模也足夠大，那么將最終成為交通改善的

50、起點</p><p>　　大的工廠可以繳納很多稅，對地方財政有好處，進而促進社區(qū)的繁榮</p><p><b>　　壞處：</b></p><p>　　帶來各種污染，比如，噪音、廢氣、污水等等</p><p><b>　　工廠不一定會贏利</b></p><p>　　相關題目

51、： [16]、[25]、[26]、[30]、[79]</p><p><b>　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　Page 8 of 201</p><p>　　TOEFL.iBT 高分作文完美重排版Edited by Lost Lawyer</p><p>　　I live in a primarily agri

52、cultural community, and most of the population lives hand to mouth. Parents keep children home from school to work in the fields. If there is a flood or a drought, people starve. A new factory would mean regular monthly

53、salaries as well as protection against natural disasters or a sudden drop in the price of our main agricultural product, say, corn. Regular salaries would allow families the confidence to make investments in their future

54、s. The locals would be able to pla</p><p>　　regions will come here looking for work. Because of their relative poverty they will work harder for less money than the locals and drive wages down. There might b

55、e more immigrants than factory jobs available, leading to an unemployment crisis with a rising crime rate as a potential negative side effect. On the other hand, the proposed factory would almost certainly have adverse e

56、ffects on the local environment, particularly in regards to polluting the water. This is perhaps the most serious con</p><p>　　without clean water the area cannot sustain life of any kind, com, livestock, or

57、 human. However, because of the relatively desperate economic situation of my hometown, I believe the potential benefits of opening a new factory would outweigh the risks. If we take the proper precautions, such as impos

58、ing strict environmental standards and providing adequate social services for immigrants, the whole area stands to benefit.</p><p>　　6. The most important thing you want to change about your hometown</p&g

59、t;<p>　　If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons</p><p>　　and specific examples to support your answer.</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b

60、></p><p>　　改變其環(huán)境，因為一個好的環(huán)境會使人們</p><p><b>　　更加快樂</b></p><p><b>　　更加健康</b></p><p><b>　　更加有效率</b></p><p>　　相關題目：[52]、[14

61、1]、[165]都可以選擇改變其環(huán)境。這些題目實際上可以用一篇文章應對。</p><p>　　Page 9 of 201</p><p>　　TOEFL.iBT 高分作文完美重排版Edited by Lost Lawyer</p><p><b>　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　I was born in a

62、small town named Hailin, located in the North-East of China. The most serious problems in my hometown are the backward ideas about a woman's place in the family, school, workplace, and society. These negative stereot

63、ypes hurt not only women, but all of society as well. If possible, I would change the attitudes of the people in my hometown so they would view men and women equally. Discrimination against women in my hometown begins be

64、fore they are even born. Because people here</p><p>　　believe that only a man can carry on the family line, every family wants to have at least one son. Each family is only supposed to have one child because

65、 of the overpopulation problem. This means that if a family can find out a fetus is female before it is born they might abort it. Or in other cases, people will have many female babies before they have a son, which only

66、makes the population problem worse. If female babies were considered as important as male babies, then these two problems proba</p><p>　　are not as smart as men and we shouldn't waste time and money educ

67、ating them. Families often insist that their daughters stay at home and help with housework while sending their sons to school. Girls are born every bit as smart as boys and equally deserve to reap the benefits of educat

68、ion. Many of the world's famous scientists and leaders are women, from Marie Curie to Margaret Thatcher. We need to eliminate the stereotype that women are less intelligent than men so that our community can benefi&l

69、t;/p><p>　　7. The influence of movies or television on people's behavior</p><p>　　How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support</p

70、><p>　　your answer.</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　電影、電視等大眾傳媒(mass media)往往可以對人們的行為產生影響</p><p>　　通過改變人們的價值觀、世界觀、審美觀而改變人們行為</p><p>　　通過制造“社會熱點”而使大眾不

71、停地討論一件事情</p><p>　　通過滿足人們的幻想，或使人們處于平衡狀態(tài)，或使人們一定程度上失衡</p><p><b>　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　The impact that movies or television has had on our daily life, and society in general,

72、is undeniable. No doubt it will become even greater as the scope of which continues to grow, and as the relevant technologies become more and more sophisticated, and so fascinating that virtually nobody will be able to e

73、scape. Already, it can be seen how western movies are exercising influence on our youth generation: they grow long-hair regardless of their gender, commonly part of which is dyed in gold; they</p><p>　　8. Ha

74、s television destroyed communication among people?</p><p>　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among</p><p>　　friends and family. Use s

75、pecific reasons and examples to support your opinion.</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　不．能．同．意．這．個．觀．點．。一方面人們看電視的時間越來越多；另外一方面人與人之間的關系越來越冷漠。但是</p><p>　　這兩個現象并不是完全、直接的因果關系。造成

76、人們關系冷漠的原因很多，比如，來自方方面面的壓力：</p><p><b>　　工作、生活。</b></p><p>　　Page 11 of 201</p><p>　　TOEFL.iBT 高分作文完美重排版Edited by Lost Lawyer</p><p><b>　　『范文』</b>&

77、lt;/p><p>　　While television has been somewhat harmful in its effects, it has hardly "destroyed" communication among friends and family, although for some people, the assertion that television has des

78、troyed communication among friends and family seems pretty plausible. Television, invented in last century, with its wide availability, increasingly prosperous programs, becomes</p><p>　　one of the most powe

79、rful means of communication in the history, and is more and more difficult to ignore. Television is as much a part of our lives as are our meals, work, or school; studies consistently show that the average American child

80、 spends almost as much time watching television as does he or she in school. We all have only 24 hours a day and it is clear that the more time one spends on watching television, the less time one does with his or her fa

81、mily and friends. Hence the passage prin</p><p>　　9. Live in a small town or in a big city?</p><p>　　Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place

82、would you</p><p>　　prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　生活在大城市的優(yōu)缺點：信息發(fā)達，工作機會多，生活設施完善；人情淡薄</p>

83、<p>　　生活在小城市的優(yōu)缺點：溫馨，安靜，空氣好；人們相互了解、友善；信息閉塞；沒有好工作</p><p>　　Page 12 of 201</p><p>　　TOEFL.iBT 高分作文完美重排版Edited by Lost Lawyer</p><p>　　陳述自己的偏好(可以采取"it depends"的策略，不同的階段有

84、不同的偏好)</p><p><b>　　相關題目：[20]</b></p><p><b>　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issues as preference between a big ci

85、ty and a small town. It's a little bit haste to say that it is better to live in a big city than in a small town, or vice versa.Living in a big city has several benefits. First, there're more job opportunities re

86、adily available in big cities than in a small town. Moreover, not merely are there more job positions in big cities and the qualities of the position are much higher as well. In addition, the pa</p><p>　　uti

87、lities available in big cities; there are even much more television channels in big cities.However, living in a small town also has some advantages. People who live in a small town often have a much comfortable life styl

88、e. Most of them do not have to suffer high working stress. Although the average pay is much less than that of big cities, the price of daily necessities, such as vegetables or meat, is usually less expensive. Instead of

89、suffering loneliness which is prevalent in big cities, ch</p><p>　　car accidents. They might have fewer channels in television, but they have more friends readily available to chat or entertain with. Accordi

90、ng to my current situation, although I am longing for the cozy atmosphere and relationship among neighbors and friends which almost only exist in small cities, I have chosen to live in one of the biggest cities in my cou

91、ntry—Beijing, since I have found a pretty good job here, and a decent pay. I think I would prefer living in a small town when I get retired </p><p>　　10. Does luck have anything to do with success?</p>

92、<p>　　“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree</p><p>　　or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain y

93、our position.</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　nothing是一個絕對詞，所以，不能完全同意也不能完全不同意。選擇“很大程度上同意”。</p><p>　　指出luck確實存在</p><p>　　指出可能導致人們成功的若干原因：誠實、睿智、幽默；執(zhí)著；肯于做不喜歡的事情[

94、27]；</p><p>　　相關題目：[27]、[63]</p><p><b>　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　Here is a true story, a story about an African man called Cinque who slew a most terrifying beast that any one

95、 has ever seen, a lion. His siblings in the village who know about this anecdote gave him great respect and call him the big man. However, he told the truth later. "It had killed several people, even hunters among u

96、s. Everyone including me was afraid. "I was lying down with my family, when out of nowhere it appeared. "As it came for me, I picked up a big rock and I threw it. And that was</p><p>　　it, for when

97、 I threw that rock at that beast, if I missed it, I wouldn't be sitting here today trying to explain these things to you or somebody else, I'd just be dead. I'm not a big man, just a lucky one." You see,

98、 luck does exist. When it appears, mathematicians describe in such a way that something has an extremely small probability but it does happen. People often say, one has to have an opportunity to succeed. In this case, lu

99、ck is the opportunity, and to some extent is an indispensable fac</p><p>　　When people say luck has nothing to do with success, I wonder it is not their intention to deny existence of luck, but to encourage.

100、 Because luck in fact is a factor that one can not and should not count on, even though we know people who have succeeded have their own luck. It is somewhere, but nobody knows where. It happens sometime, but we don'

101、t know when. By contrast, hard work is something that everyone can count on, and as is often the case, hard work might bring luck. Therefore, luck itsel</p><p>　　11. Should universities finance students'

102、 sports activities equally as libraries?</p><p>　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of</p><p>　　money to their students' sports

103、activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons</p><p>　　and examples to support your opinion.</p><p><b>　　『分析』</b></p><p>　　不能完全同意。"sam

104、e"是一件做不到的事情。</p><p>　　普通大學，應該或更多的錢在圖書館上</p><p>　　Page 14 of 201</p><p>　　TOEFL.iBT 高分作文完美重排版Edited by Lost Lawyer</p><p>　　體育?？拼髮W，當然應該花更多的錢在體育設施上</p><p&

105、gt;　　資金分配的重要原則：產出應該大于投入</p><p>　　大學的辦學原則：要better brains；也要better bodies.</p><p>　　相關題目：[Related Topics: 147. Some relevant issues about public investments: 1) investment vs. profit; 2)</p>

106、<p>　　immediate needs vs. long-term benefits; 3) profit-making organization vs. nonprofit-making organization. Topics</p><p>　　about money allocation: 11. 19. 56. 95. 100. 167*) personal attitudes of

107、money: 32. 33. 48. 53. 131. 173. 177.185.]</p><p>　　資金分配問題：資金的有效運用(efficiency of money allocation)的重要體現是投入產出比(input-output ratio)。</p><p>　　即便是nonprofit-making organization也要保證資金的投入產出的平衡(balance

108、 of input and output)。</p><p><b>　　『范文』</b></p><p>　　The main responsibility of a university is to develop a student's academic ability. While physical health is an important pre